Genji Sports Pop Up Outdoor Family Tent
Beach Shelter Tent
Genji Sports Pop Up Outdoor Family Tent
Beach Shelter Tent – click on the image below for more information.
- Pop up outdoor tent, open in 1 second, folds down in 3 seconds
- Durable 190T UV coated 50+ nylon, CPAI-84 flame retardant material
- Light weight, easy to carry, comes with its shoulder bag
- Front and rear zipper panels, use fro camping tent or beach tent
- Tent dimension: 210cm (L)x132cm (W)x128cm (H) or 82.7″(L)x52″(W)x50″ (H)
Beach Shelter Tent
Self expanded outdoor tent auto pop opened in one second, easily folded down in 3 seconds. Packed in a 22-Inch carrying shoulder bag. Light weigh, easy to carry, suitable for beach, park and outdoor activities. Durable T190 nylon UV protected nylon (50+ UPF) rating on 4 sides of tent, flame retardant nylon meet CPAI-84 standard. Zippers back and front panels, 2 large side screen windows allow fresh air to breezes through, both windows come with roll up cover. This self erecting tent is an excellent outdoor must have equipment to carry to all outdoor activities, specially for the family with baby and children, it can prevent youngster over exposed under the sun and give parent a nice relaxing shelter to read or take a nap.This family outdoor tent has front and rear zipper panels, not only can be used as beach tent but also be used on camping and outdoor activities. An optional beach tent waterproof fly is available, it converts beach tent into a standard camping tent in seconds. The special designed water proof cover equip with zipper, ventilation windows and 4 ground stakes can be purchase separately. Self expanded outdoor tent specifications self expanded in one second, folds down in 3 second, 4sides and floor are made from durable T190 nylon cloth, UV protective coating rating 50 + UPF, flame resistance nylon meets CPAI-84 standard. 2 side screen windows with roll up cover. Fully opened zipper back and front panels. Strong steel beam frame covered by 600D Oxford nylon, light weight and durable. Comes with 4 plastic ground stakes, sand bags pockets on both side panels. Full size carrying case with shoulder strap. Tent dimension: 210 x132 x128-Centimeter (length x width x height) or 82.7 x 52 x 50-Inch (length x width x height). Large enough for two adults or one adult and many kids. Weight 5-Pounds 4-Ounce.If you’re looking for an easy-to-assemble family tent for the beach, park, or even a warm-weather campsite, you’ve found it in the Pop Up Outdoor Family Tent from Genji Sports. It automatically pops up and open in 1 second and folds back down in only 3 seconds. It’s super lightweight at only five pounds and is easily carried to the beach, park, and campground. It has front and rear zipper panels, two side screen windows with roll-up cover, and a strong steel beam frame that’s lightweight and durable. The flame resistant nylon fabric has a UV rating of 50+ UPF to protect you and your family from the sun’s harmful rays. It comes with four plastic ground stakes, sand bag pockets on both side panels, and a full-size carrying case with shoulder strap.
The Pop Up Family Tent automatically pops open and then coils back down flat into a circle. |
Features:
- Pop up outdoor tent; self-expands in 1 second, folds down in 3 seconds
- Durable 190T nylon; CPAI-84 flame retardant material
- 50+ UPF rating for sun protection
- Lightweight and easy to carry
- Comes with shoulder carrying bag
- Front and rear zipper panels, use fro camping tent or beach tent
- 2 side screen windows with roll-up covers
- Fully-opened zippered back and front panels
- Strong steel beam frame; durable and lightweight
- 4 plastic ground stakes included; sand back pockets on side panels for stabilization
Specifications:
- Dimensions: 82.7 by 52 by 50 inches (L x W x H)
- Weight: 5 pounds, 4 ounces
- Fabric: T190 nylon cloth with UPF 50+ coating
- Sleeps two adults or one adult and several children
Beach Shelter Tent List Price: $ 77.00
Beach Shelter Tent Offer Price: $ 49.50
Beach Shelter Tent question by Lexy Katherine: How does this sound for the beginning of chpt. 1 of my book?
The seat-belt lights came on. Is the flight already over? I buckled up and the oxygen masks came down. I helped the little girl next to me put hers on, then put mine on. I could tell we were loosing altitude, and fast. I closed my eyes when I remembered that we were over an ocean. Everything went black…
I woke up to the sound of the ocean’s waves swishing. Was I really still alive? Apparently. Maybe someone else was too. I sat up and looked at my watch, which was the only thing I had left. It said 5:09 a.m. It was six o’clock in the morning when the crash had occurred. Twenty-three hours and nine minutes ago.
“Anyone there? Hello?” I asked over and over again. No response. I decided to find a shelter. I looked among the wreckage and found a few helpful things. I found pillows, blankets, string, and a backpack full of snacks and drinks. I didn’t want to stay on the beach. I found an area in front of the woods that was grassy and dry. This would be where I would camp. I put everything in the backpack and looked for some thick, long branches. I managed to get the amount I needed and proceeded back to my spot. Once there, I made a tent using the string, sticks, some of the blankets, and my knowledge from girl scouts. Lucky me, huh? I went inside and laid down a pillow and blanket for me. I put the others in a corner just in case there were others still alive.
“Now I need a campfire.” I muttered to myself. But, when I went outside, there was one. Right there in front of me. No one around. Just me and the fire. I wondered how it got there, but decided some things are better left unknown. I wished that some other people were still alive. I went into the tent and ate a bag of chips. There was water in the bag, too, so I drank a little bit. When I went back outside, there was somebody. I didn’t recognize her from the flight, and I went up and down every row looking at everybody. I have a photographic memory, so there was no way I could’ve missed her. Was she the one who made the fire?
“Hello Rose.” she said.
“How did you know my name?”
“We have been watching you. Your house fire, you at the orphanage, this plane wreck. Your special Rose. Have you not noticed that? The way your
I stopped bcuz I didnt want anyone to steal it—————————————– anyways…
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Comments on Genji Sports Pop Up Outdoor Family Tent
~Oasis Water~ @ 9:56 pm
Err…it’s okay…
Slow it down and add more description.
I Give Harsh Criticism @ 10:23 pm
This goes way too fast. This needs much more detail and a touch of reality thrown in. You also are lacking in human emotion and coulld use some heart-wrenching scenes like him finding bodies of his fellow passengers, and etc.
Also, as the plane crashing thing has been done lots, you should a add a good twist or shock.
MCR fan <3 <3 Angel @ 10:46 pm
it’s very good!! well done!
Casey @ 11:21 pm
It’s a good beginning, but I think your character is falling flat. She isn’t reacting to any of the things that are happening around her! She has to be scared to death while the plane is losing altitude, thinking about her family and her life. She has to be hopeless and alone on the island, and confused and maybe even scared of the woman who knows her name.
Just some suggestions. Keep writing.
Hermione Granger @ 12:01 am
It goes too fast… Slow down.
Just Like That @ 12:01 am
Hey
“Now I need a campfire.” I muttered to myself.
Should be:
“Now I need a campfire,” I muttered to myself.
This happens in other places as well
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Yes it goes fast, add more description and your writing in first person so add more emotion, thoughts
It’s good, though, just some ways to improve ^
rain.creation @ 12:59 am
Okay, before I jump into the whole constructive criticism, I’d like to say that you do have a good idea. But you may potentially run into a small problem. Since the creation of the T.V show “Lost” many people have tried to re-create the whole plane crash/surviving on an island thing. Now I do not know much about your story, but I’d advise you not to go down that path as your will continue to run into road blocks along the way. Especially with your readers, because as soon as they begin reading, they will most likely think of Lost…as did I.
Now…the pace you set moves way too quickly, within seconds of beginning the story the character is already stranded alone on an island. You also reveal that the character is special way too soon and you seem to jump over the days it should have taken before the character finds anyone else, or before they learn that they are special. As someone already suggested, you need some emotion in here. One does’t simply just crash and then sit around. Where are the descriptions, the emotions?
Description-there really isn’t any in the main part of this. I have no idea what the character looks like, why she was even on the plane in the first place. You leave out who she is. All I know is that her name is Rose and she’s an orphan. But that’s it. I don’t know how old she is, what she looks like, what she believes in, her past, her hopes, I don’t know anything about her. Another thing that really needs some describing is where she landed. From the sounds of it, she’s on an island as you did mention she was over the ocean. But you never tell us its an island. What’s the island look like? Was it beautiful before the crash? What does the wreckage look like? Are their trees, rivers, hills? What part of the island is she on? Is there more to it, is it big or small? Can she see anything from it?
Right before the crash could use some work as well. Its too short and there’s no emotion, no description. Are people freaking out? Is she scared? What about the little girl? Who is she, is she scared? Is she crying? Are people screaming? Has the captain said anything to try and calm people? Did they hit the water first, could she look out the window and see the quickly approaching water/ground? Why was the plane crashing? Did a wing break, an engine? Was it terrorists? Was their smoke, fire, blood? (Some of these same things could be used to describe the wreckage later)You really do need some more info there, as without it the reader will never be able to understand what’s happened.
As I mentioned before you seem to jump straight from waking up to finding people. It typically doesn’t happen that quickly. Perhaps Rose could wander around for a bit, maybe have to actually survive by herself before she runs into anyone else. Have her actually spend a night alone on the strange island, maybe she should go hunting for food or berries. You need something there, the story needs to slow down a bit. If this were real life, there’s no way all of this would happen so quickly.
I also mentioned that you reveal some information too soon, such as the fact that the character is special. Those type of things are really important to the development of the character, and if you reveal it too soon you risk losing your reader’s interest as there is no build up to it. We literally just met the character and suddenly she’s special. The reader cannot understand or relate to this. There is no way that the reader would have ever been able to guess it. Perhaps you can show how Rose is special a bit before you flat out tell us. Remember, readers need to like and sympathize with the characters. They need to understand what’s going on with the character, if you create characters that your readers do not like…then your writing will never go anywhere. You have to prove to us that this character is special, you can’t just say she is. You have to prove it.
Emotion-Doesn’t the character care that she’s alone on an island? Doesn’t she care that she cant seem to find anyone else? Where is her compassion, her feelings? Or does she not have a heart? People don’t simply crash and then sit around thinking about finding shelter. They go in look of others, they are typically scared and worried. They HAVE to know if there are others out there, or if they are truly alone. I find it really hard to believe that the very first thing she’d think of is “I need to find shelter” If you crashed the first thing you’d do is look for survivors and scan the wreckage for anything usable. As I mentioned in the paragraph above, your readers need to like the character. At the moment the readers do not know what they should think or feel towards the reader. Also just a warning, its hard for a reader to sympathize with someone who does not feel emotion. Everyone does, and when a character doesn’t, it makes the character appear unrealistic.
Now, I hope I’ve helped you in some ways. I am by no means an expert (especially since I wa